2825 Ala Ilima street
Honolul, HI, 96818
November 13, 2012
Wet’n’Wild Water Park
400 Farrington Highway
Kapolei, Hawaii, 96707
Dear Wet’n’Wild Water Park Administration,
My friends and I have been satisfied customers of Wet’n’Wild
for many years now. Your new rides once a year, fun slides, and your very
friendly employees keep my friends and I coming back.
However, the day we went we really wanted to ride the Shaka,
the Raging River, and the Island Racer all on the same day. But since all of
these rides are rotation rides it was hard to ride all of them because there is
always a long line from everyone changing lines to ride the ones in progress.
The last time I went with my friends to Wet’n’Wild we had to wait in line for
around 20 minutes just to ride one ride. With only a limited time at the
amazing water park we were disappointed to leave and not being able to ride all
the rides wanting to. I understand that sometimes you guys can’t always have all the rides open at the same time, but
in that case I would suggest that Wet’n’Wild get more employees so more rides
are open the entire time you are open.
In addition, my friends and I went to your water park 3
times in the same summer and found out some of the rides weren’t open at the
time. I get that sometimes we can’t always be pleased with everything, but we
had this happened to us multiple times. With that happening I just wanted to
bring that to your attention.
Through all of this, your employees at Wet’n’Wild were very
polite on the way telling us the rides at the time were unavailable. They all
said they were sorry for the inconvenience and that next time they should be
ready for us.
I have no objection to your policies of what to offer patron
but feel that you should open all of the rides up during the open hours so the
people can experience all of the excitement in one day to get their moneys
worth.
Sincerely,
Brooke Yoshida
Hi brookie (: this was a good topic, as I often encounter situations like this while going to the waterpark too, haha. To add a stronger argument about the limited time you have there, you should go into the hours there, because I know a lot of the time they do close early, at around 3 or 4. Just get a few more stronger facts and reasons to back up your argument, and you should be good!
ReplyDeleteGod topic, i can relate to it. It was very clear and straight to the point. There was one or two grammatical errors. But overall you made a very firm and strong point. Oh, and Also like what eryn said... And a little bit more reasons and facts.
ReplyDeletePlease make sure that all your statements make sense and also read over and fix grammatical errors. You might want to reconsider either revising or discarding the third paragraph because it sounds very similar to the one before. MS(3)
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