Your graphic is very clear and corresponds with your poem, but maybe make change the way Ariel and the Board are put together, it looks sort of like a portal.
fix ariel and the board it doesn't the background at all. Also your allusion is very unclear, the audience is not sure why you have ariel and why you have wave. you need show why you chose ariel through text and graphics. AS(1+)
Your graphic is very clear and corresponds with your poem, but maybe make change the way Ariel and the Board are put together, it looks sort of like a portal.
ReplyDeletefix ariel and the board it doesn't the background at all. Also your allusion is very unclear, the audience is not sure why you have ariel and why you have wave. you need show why you chose ariel through text and graphics. AS(1+)
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